Anna Chung
Can you help me to correct my essay ?Thank you I leant the meaning of embracing life is to accept all of our lives, whether is happiness of successes or pain of failures. Our lives are incomplete if we only highlight our happiness and ignore our failures .

In this story, Remen shows a puzzle game to reflect human lives, she hid the ugly puzzles what she don’t like. But Without the pieces She had hidden, the game had made no sense. Those ugly puzzles are the fear, failures and unfortunates in our lives , But are also a significant part of our lives.Life will be meaningless if we hide them behind us and ignore them.

When put the dark pieces in place the picture, a beautiful sense of picture emerged. Every fragment has its meaning of existence.In fact, the dark pieces of life what we don't want to accept and even try to escape can be a strong force in growing progress. Of course, the kind of strength belongs to those who face and accept their pain with positive attitudes and thoughts.

Dec 1, 2017 10:40 PM
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I learned the meaning of embracing life is to accept all of our lives, whether it is happiness of our success or the pain that comes with our failures. Our lives are incomplete if we only highlight our happiness and ignore our failures .

In this story, Remen shows a puzzle game to reflect human lives, she hid the ugly puzzles, which she didn't like. But without the pieces she had hidden, the game made no sense. Those ugly puzzles are the fear, failures and unfortunate events in our lives, but are also a significant part of our lives. Life will be meaningless if we hide them behind us and ignore them.

When we put the dark pieces in place, a beautiful sense of picture, emerges. Every fragment has its meaning of existence. In fact, the dark pieces of life are what we don't want to accept and even try to escape, can be a strong force in our growing progress. Of course, the kind of strength belongs to those who face and accept their pain with positive attitudes and thoughts.

December 1, 2017
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