Please help/chech my translation of this paragraph The paragraph is: こんにちは。 日本語でメッセージを書かせていただきますね。 私も正確な英語を学ぶ必要があるので、お互いに言葉を学べたらと思います。 伝わる英語ではなく、正確な英語を学びたいのです。 文法的に正しいだけではなく、自然な文章を書きたいのです。 私は日本語の英作文を添削することができます。 あなたに私の書いた英語を添削してもらいたいです。 ところで、 I want to find language-learning partners who are serious about learning and helping each other to learn another language. は、どうして I want to find language-learning partners who are serious about learning and helping each other to learn the other's language. にならないのですか？ 私の名前を英訳すると I govern within the temple with brilliance." となります。 漢字は秘密です。（笑） 私が脚本を作っているドラマは、SkyPerfecTVという衛星放送で放送されています。 マイナーで、有名ではありません。 My translation is: Hello. I will write a message in Japanese(?). Because I need to learn correct English, <something-- This part confuses me!> I don't send it in English, I want to learn correct English. Not only grammatically correct <English>, but also natural-sounding English. I can correct <something about English and Japanese>. I want you to correct my English writing. By the way, why is "I want to find language-learning partners who are serious about learning and helping each other to learn another language" not "I want to find language-learning partners who are serious about learning and helping each other to learn the other's language"? <He's commenting about a sentence on my profile here.> The English translation of my name is "I govern within the temple with brilliance". The kanji is a secret (lol). The drama script I made is broadcast on SkyPerfec TV. It minor, it is not well-known. Is my translation okay? <the parts I understood, that is! ^-^> Does anyone have any suggestions, or corrections? Thank you so much! ^-^