Great, your writing level is B1, your use of some connecting tools was good, I advise you to reach higher levels of writing with three points: 1. Read simple Arabic literature, there are good texts from simple Arabic literature that make your words more mature and deeper in meaning, and make your linguistic expression beautiful. Moving from B1 to C2 level in writing requires examining successful examples from Arab writers. 2. Use idiomatic expressions in your writing, they make writing better, and nourish it with beautiful meanings. 3. Use the linking tools in a better way, there are a lot of linking tools that make your writing high level..

أفضل كتاب قرأته وغير حياتي كلياً هو القرءان الكريم 💜لم يقرأه أحد ولم يتغير إلى الأفضل! ماهو رأيك عن هذا الكتاب العظيم!؟ نصيحة خذي فكرة عنه حقا ستذهلين!!!!

لغتك حقا جميله .. لا أكاد أصدق أنك تعلمت كل هذا في سنه واحده 👌 لك أحترامي 💐🎩