In this week end I hope to go to the sea,to day in the state where I live start the autumn. In my opinion it is the best season, the climate is good and there are few people in the beach.The water will be llittle bit cold but today I have bought a wetsuit and i will can swimming.
Sep 21, 2021 7:58 PM
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For this weekend, I hope to go to the sea. In the state where I live, autumn is beginning. In my opinion, it is the best season - the climate is good and there are few people at the beach. The water will be little bit cold, but I have bought a wetsuit so I will be able to go swimming. Comments: *You're going to the sea for the weekend, so the correct preposition to start with is 'For'. *Verbs go after the noun they are describing, so we would say 'autumn is beginning' (you could use 'starting', 'beginning' sounds more appropriate for this when writing). *People are AT the beach, it is a location/place where they visit. Saying people are 'in' the beach would infer something like everyone being underneath the sand or something silly like that! *I've taken out your 'today's, because the prompt is asking about future plans, and you started it off that way by saying what you plan to do for the weekend. *I get the tense you're trying to convey with 'will can', but the grammatically correct way to write that is 'will be able to'
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September 21, 2021
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