Claudia
At the beginning of the year, I was torn between staying or quitting my job. One of the consequences pandemic brought to my job, is that we couldn’t receive any tourists. So, I was only teaching online to my coworkers 2-3 days a week. This situation turned little bit nerve-racking for me because I only had one activity to perform in this company. On the other hand, I took advantage of this situation to finally get my college degree andThat made me realized that the research field was very interesting. For that reason, I started to look for other options to grow professionally. And as a result I got enrolled in this master’s program.
Sep 21, 2021 11:26 PM
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At the beginning of the year, I was torn between staying or quitting my job. One of the consequences that the pandemic brought to my job is that we couldn’t receive any tourists. So, I was only teaching online to my coworkers two to three days a week. This situation turned a little bit nerve-racking for me because I only had one activity to perform in this company. On the other hand, I took advantage of this situation to finally get my college degree and that made me realize that the research field was very interesting. For that reason, I started to look for other options to grow professionally. As a result, I got enrolled in this master’s program. Comments: *One rule about more formally written English is that if a number is less than 10, we spell it out. It's a weird rule, I know :P *The pandemic is a specific, universal thing right now, so it needs an article 'the' before it. *In written English, we typically don't start a sentence with a conjunction (like 'and' or 'but').
Overall, great job! Please let me know if you have any other questions (:
September 21, 2021
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