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Please correct my sentences ! Last Sunday, I did a volunteer activity at a home for the aged. It was second time for me to visit there.We used "Origami"(folding paper),and made "Azisai"(a flower name) together.An old woman looked pleased and she said she want to display "Azisai" which I made.I was very happy to hear that! I put up "Azisai" on the wall in her room.We also helped staff to clean wheelchairs.I want to visit there again. 先週の日曜日,老人ホームでボランティア活動をしました。私にとって2回目の訪問でした。折り紙で紫陽花(あじさい)を作りました。あるお婆さんは私の作った折り紙の紫陽花をとても気に入ってくれて,部屋に飾りたいと言ってくれました。喜んでもらえてとても嬉しかったです。私は折り紙の紫陽花をお婆さんの部屋の壁に飾りました。また,私達は職員さんが車椅子を掃除するのを手伝いました。またボランティア活動をしに訪問したいです。
Jun 29, 2015 3:10 PM
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Last Sunday, I did a volunteer activity at a home for the aged. It was my second time to visit there. We made Origami Azisai flowers together. An old woman looked pleased and she said she want to display the Azisai I made. I was very happy and put up my Azisai on the wall in her room. We also helped staff to clean wheelchairs. I want to visit there again.

 

 

In English Azisai are called Hydrangea.

 

But Hydrangea is the flowers family name.

Azisai has some odd common names around the world like Big Leaf, Mop Head or French Hydrangea - so i think it words best to use the Japanese flower name.

June 29, 2015
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Please correct my sentences!

Last Sunday, I did a volunteer activity at a home for the aged. It was my second time visiting there. We used <em>origami</em> (folding paper), and made <em>azisai</em> (a flower name) together. One old woman looked pleased, and she said she wanted to display the <em>azisai</em> which I made. I was very happy to hear that! I put up my <em>azisai</em> on the wall in her room. We also helped the staff to clean wheelchairs. I want to visit there again.

 

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In English, we use italics (<em>italics</em> - slanted letters) to write foreign words. 

June 29, 2015
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