Helen
There are several popular apps in my country,say WeChat, YouTube, Bilibili and So on. The reasons I think are as follows: Firstly, they make our life more convenient. Take WeChat as example, it’s payment function could make us pay money to nearly every sellers no matter who they are. Secondly, they can make us get a lot of fun. We can watch many interesting tv shows and tv series on YouTube. At last, we also can learn knowledge from these apps. There are lots of unloaders who are good at learning on Bilibili. We can follow their ways to learn to improve our abilities.
27 de feb. de 2022 1:46
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There are several popular apps in my country such as WeChat, YouTube, and Bilibili. The reasons I think they are so popular are as follows. Firstly, they make our life more convenient. Take WeChat, for example: its payment function allows us to pay money to nearly any seller, no matter who they are. Secondly, they are very entertaining. We can watch many interesting TV shows and TV series on YouTube. Lastly, we also can learn a lot using these apps. There are lots of users on Bilibili who are good at learning who post interesting content. We can see how they learn and improve our own abilities.
Great! Don’t forget the difference between “at last” and “lastly”. By uploaders, I think you mean people who post content.
27 de febrero de 2022
There are several popular apps in my country,say WeChat, YouTube, Bilibili and So on. The reasons I think are as follows: Firstly, they make our life more convenient. Take WeChat as example, it’s payment function could make us pay money to nearly every sellers no matter who they are. Secondly, they can make us get a lot of fun. We can watch many interesting tv shows and tv series on YouTube. At last, we also can learn knowledge from these apps. There are lots of unloaders who are good at learning on Bilibili. We can follow their ways to learn to improve our abilities.
28 de febrero de 2022
There are several popular apps in my country. For example WeChat, YouTube, Bilibili and many more. The reasons I think are as follows: Firstly, they make our life more convenient. Take WeChat for example, its payment function could help us pay money to nearly any seller no matter who they are. Secondly, they can help us have a lot of fun. We can watch many interesting tv shows and tv series on YouTube. Lastly, we also can learn knowledge from these apps. There are lots of unloaders (I’m not sure what you want to say here? Educators?) who are good at learning on Bilibili. We can follow their ways to learn to improve our abilities.
Well done! Only a few small mistakes, but I’m not sure what “unloaders” refers to- maybe if you clarify I can help you fix the last two sentences :)
27 de febrero de 2022
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