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Rashmi
This is morning, the sun was shining bright but in the evening it was about to rain. But it didn't rain.
10 avr. 2023 15:02
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The sun was shining bright this morning, but in the evening, it looked like it was about to rain, however, it didn't.
10 avril 2023
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Now it is morning and the sun is shining bright, but in the evening it was supposed to rain. But it didn't rain.
11 avril 2023
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This is morning, the sun was shining brightly but in the evening it was about to rain. But it didn't rain. The times are confusing me. When are you writing this? In the morning? The words "this is morning" indicate that you are writing in the morning. Which evening are you talking about? Today or last night? I would say "brightly" because "bright" is normally an adjective, and you need an adverb. I wouldn't call this a mistake because some people do use "bright" as an adverb, but I think "brightly" sounds more normal.
10 avril 2023
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This morning, the sun was shining bright, but in the evening it looked like it was going to rain. But it didn't rain.
I replaced "it was about to rain" because that phase indicates that rain was going to happen in the immediate future. There are various ways to say what you meant to say, so I just picked one.
10 avril 2023
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This morning and the sun was shining bright but in the evening it looked like it would rain. But it didn't rain.
10 avril 2023
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