Hello everyone, what’s going on? I would like to describe my picture witch I’ve taken this afternoon. It’s Naples seaside with volcano Vesuvio. It’s almost sunset and the relaxing atmosphere makes me

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TizianaDM

Hello everyone, what’s going on? I would like to describe my picture witch I’ve taken this afternoon. It’s Naples seaside with volcano Vesuvio. It’s almost sunset and the relaxing atmosphere makes me feel well.I’m grateful to God.

18 janv. 2021 13:38

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Hello everyone, what’s going on? I would like to describe the picture which/that I’ve taken this afternoon. It’s of the seaside in Naples and Mount Vesuvius. It’s almost sunset and the relaxing atmosphere makes me feel great/happy/content. I’m grateful to God for this moment.

Ciao Tiziana! Great work on this writing overall, I just wanted to give a quick note about which/that in this description. You can use both, but using “which” makes your description a bit more formal whereas using “that” makes it sound a bit more colloquial! Also, typically we don’t say that things make us feel “well” we would use a more descriptive adjective like happy/content/relaxed/etc. I hope this helps! ☺️

18 janvier 2021

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