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This is the picture which my friend took. This picture is my favorite because it is very beautiful and vivid. I like to see the sky. The sky of this picture is so beautiful that I can watch it forever. Also, the tree of this picture is vivid. This picture consists of only two colors-blue and green. Therefor, I feel this is beautiful and vivid picture. My friend is good at taking pictures, so I want her to teach me how to take pictures well. However, she is too busy to take pictures with me, so I’m looking forward to seeing her someday again!
16 juin 2021 08:41
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This is a picture which my friend took. This picture is my favorite because it is very beautiful and vivid. I like looking at the sky. The sky in this picture is so beautiful that I can look at it forever. Also, the tree in this picture is vivid. The main colors in the picture are blue and green. Therefore, I think that it is beautiful and vivid. My friend is good at taking pictures, so I want her to teach me how to do it well. However, she is too busy to take pictures with me, so I’m looking forward to seeing her someday again!
Too many repetitions and tautology, it would be better to add more ideas.
16 juin 2021
This is the picture which my friend took. This picture is my favorite because it is very beautiful and vivid. I like to see the sky. The sky of this picture is so beautiful that I can watch it forever. Also, the tree of this picture is vivid. This picture consists of only two colors-blue and green. Therefor, It gives me an impression of beautiful and vivid picture. My friend is good at taking pictures, so I want her to teach me how to take pictures as well. However, she is too busy to take pictures with me, so I’m looking forward to seeing her someday again!
The picture is really beautiful!
16 juin 2021
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