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Patty
I was really busy last week. I found a new part-time job in stationary store and started to learn everything. I thought it was not too difficult to do and could interacted with people was interesting! I liked having small chat with customers, helping them to find whatever they want and creating the memorable experience for them. And recently, I also started to think about my future. I plan to study aboard for three months but I’m still considering which counties should I go. Korea have a class that teacher will use Korean in the whole class so that I can improve my listening and speaking a lot. However, I also would like to study in America because maybe fluent in English will more beneficial to my long term.
3 déc. 2025 13:58
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I was really busy last week. I found a new part-time job in a store and started to learn everything. I thought it was not too difficult and that the fact I could interact with people was interesting! I liked having small chats with customers, helping them to find whatever they wanted and offering them a memorable experience. And recently, I also started to think about my future. I plan to study aboard for three months but I’m still considering which counties I should go. Korea has classes where teachers use Korean during the whole class so that I can improve my listening and speaking a lot. However, I also would like to study in America because maybe being fluent in English will be more beneficial for my in the long term.
Good work Patty, I'm not really sure what you mean by "stationary store" however. Have a nice evening.
il y a 3 heures
I was really busy last week. I found a new part-time job at a stationary store and was learning everything. I thought it wasn't too difficult to do and could interacting with people was interesting! I enjoyed having small chats with customers, helping them find what they wanted and creating the memorable experiences for them. Recently, I also started to think about my future. I plan to study aboard for three months, but I’m still considering which country I should go to. Korea offers classes where the teacher uses only Korean the whole time, so I could improve my listening and speaking a lot. However, I'm also interested in studying in America, since being fluent in English is probably more beneficial for me in the long term.
That should be easier to read. Great job! The corrections are mostly about polishing grammar and choosing more natural phrasing.
il y a 2 heures
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