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Please, help. What mistakes are in the text? Dear Mr. Collins, there are some problems. I finde some difficult to do my work. I work in an open-plan office which I share with a number of colleagues, but open-plan office brings problems. I can't concentrate on my work because of there are some background noise created by my colleagues. There are a chatting, ringing, slamming a door and others. I don't hear my own thoughts in this chaos. It pressure on me. I need repeat questions to our clients, and eventually they don't hear me. I have a solution how fix that problem. I think it would be better if I work at home where I can pull weight to reach company's goals without efforts. What do you think of a remote job for me?
12 avr. 2024 12:20
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Please, help. What mistakes are in the text? Dear Mr. Collins, there are some problems. I found some difficult to do my work. I work in an open-plan office which I share with a number of colleagues, but open-plan office brings problems. I can't concentrate on my work because of there are some background noise created by my colleagues. There are a chatting, ringing, slamming a door and others. I don't hear my own thoughts in this chaos. It pressure on me. I need repeat questions to our clients, and eventually they don't hear me. I have a solution how fix that problem. I think it would be better if I work at home where I can pull weight to reach company's goals without efforts. What do you think of a remote job for me?
12 avril 2024
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Please, help. What mistakes are in the text? Dear Mr. Collins, there are some problems. I finde some difficult to do my work. I work in an open-plan office which I share with a number of colleagues, but open-plan office brings problems. I can't concentrate on my work because of there are some background noise created by my colleagues. There are a chatting, ringing, slamming a door and others. I don't hear my own thoughts in this chaos. It pressure on me. I need repeat questions to our clients, and eventually they don't hear me. I have a solution how fix that problem. I think it would be better if I work at home where I can pull weight to reach company's goals without efforts. What do you think of a remote job for me?
Dear Mr. Collins, I would like to bring to your attention some problems that make it difficult for me to do my job. I work in an open-plan office that I share with my colleagues. Unfortunately, this open-plan creates some problems. The amount of background noise makes it difficult for me to concetrate on my tasks. There are chatting, phone ringing, door slamming, etc. The amount of noise is simply overwhelming and puts a lot of emotional pressure on me. Oftentimes, I have to repeat questions to my clients and at other times they simply cannot hear me. I would like to suggest a solution to this problem. I believe working from home would greatly help me to improve my performance and reach company's goals with much less effort. What do you think about a possibility of me working remotly?
13 avril 2024
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Please, help. What mistakes are in the text? Dear Mr. Collins, There are some challenges. I find it's difficult to do my job. I work in an open-plan office which I share with colleagues'numbers, but the open-plan office always puts me in hot water. I can't concentrate on my work because there is background noise created by my colleagues. There are chatting, ringing, slamming between doors and others. I don't hear my own thoughts in this chaos. It's pressure on me. I need to repeat questions to my clients, and eventually they don't hear me. however, I have a solution how to fix that problem. I think it would be better if I worked at home where I could pull weight to reach the company's goals without effort. What do you think of a remote job for me?
12 avril 2024
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Please, help. What mistakes are in the text? Dear Mr. Collins, there are some problems. I find it difficult to do my work. I work in an open-plan office which I share with a number of colleagues, but the open-plan office brings some problems. I can't concentrate on my work because there is background noise created by my colleagues. They are chatting, ringing, slamming the door and other things . I can’t hear my own thoughts in this chaos. It puts pressure on me. I need to repeat questions to our clients, and eventually they cant hear me due to the noise . I have a solution of how to fix the problem. I think it would be better if I work at home where I can pull some of the weight to reach the company's goals without efforts. What are your thoughts on a remote job for me ?
12 avril 2024
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Please, help. What mistakes are in the text? Dear Mr. Collins, there are some problems. I finde some difficult to do my work. I work in an open-plan office which I share with a number of colleagues, but open-plan office brings problems. I can't concentrate on my work because of there are some background noise created by my colleagues. There are a chatting, ringing, slamming a door and others. I don't hear my own thoughts in this chaos. It pressure on me. I need repeat questions to our clients, and eventually they don't hear me. I have a solution how fix that problem. I think it would be better if I work at home where I can pull weight to reach company's goals without efforts. What do you think of a remote job for me? Hi Lena, there is an error in your profile. Change 'massage' for 'message' and you'll be fine.
12 avril 2024
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