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can you please correct my sentences?thank you in advance!
hi everyone, my name is lily,i speak three languages and i have the experience of teaching chidren and adults,i use diffrent methods to make students understand more about chinese,and i teach them from the beggining level to advanced level,i like learning forein languages so i know the difficultis it may have while learning them and i can help my students to over come them.im looking forward to seeing you
3 mai 2024 16:28
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Hi everyone, my name is Lily. I speak three languages and have experience teaching children and adults. I use different methods to help students understand Chinese more effectively, and I teach all levels, from beginner to advanced.
Since I enjoy learning foreign languages myself, I understand the difficulties involved and can help my students overcome them. I look forward to seeing you in class!
3 mai 2024
Hi everyone, my name is Lily. I speak three languages, and I have years of experience teaching children and adults. I use different methods to help students understand more about Chinese, and I teach them from the beginning level to the advanced level. I like learning foreign languages, so I know the difficulties one may face while learning them, and I can help my students overcome them. I'm looking forward to seeing you.
capital Hi - It is the start of a sentence. The first word of every sentence needs to be capitalized.
capital L in Lily - It is a name aka a proper noun. Proper nouns are always capitalized.
period after Lily - There is too much information in this sentence. You are using too many commas and not enough periods. You can break them up with periods so it reads smoother.
capital I - When you use I as a pronoun it has to be capitalized.
comma after languages - separates your independent clauses
removed - the experience - wrong use of the article the.
added a period after adults. Complete thought.
spelling - children / different / beginning / foreign / difficulties
capital C in Chinese - proper noun
period after level.
overcome is a compound word
im is I'm - a contraction of I am
period after you.
Must study -
spelling
sentence structures
- compound sentence
- complex sentences
- compound-complex sentence
contractions
independent clauses
dependent clauses
proper nouns
articles
Hope this helps.
3 mai 2024
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Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais, Coréen, Espagnol
Langue étudiée
Anglais, Coréen, Espagnol
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