Sayuri
I watched "Queen's Gambit" on Netflixtfli. It was a girl's success story who became a chess champion. Before introducing my favorite line, I will explain a story because it's a part of the story. She lost her mother in front of her in a car accident. It was suicide. She was sent orphanage. She tried to learn chess in the basement, and it was only her curiosity. Mr.Shibael taught her. he noticed that she is a gifted person, playing chess. The staff gave her pills, named tranquilizers, that caused her addiction. one day, she stole drugs. Therefore, she got punishment. She didn't allow herself to play chess anymore. One day, she dropped off at the orphanage and gradually participated in chess tournaments. As such a chess player, she became famous. However, She still has addicted to drugs. One day Mr.Shibael passed away, and she visited the orphanage. That remained her back in the day. The teacher taught students, " choices have consequences. Your parents had a certain choice. You will have to better choice than your patients." It's so meanful. Because we always had many choices, but I didn't think about it. We had to make decisions on the fly, but I'm not sure I did it correctly. Thank you for reading the long sentences.
3 mai 2022 10:21
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I watched "Queen's Gambit" on Netflix. It was about a female chess champion's success story. Before introducing my favorite line, I will explain the story in order to get the context. Her mother died in front of her in a car accident, which was actually a suicide attempt, and she was sent in an orphanage. She got curious about chess and tried to learn how to play it in the basement. Mr.Shibael noticed how gifted she was at playing chess and decided to teach her. The staff gave her tranquilizers, that caused her to become addicted. She stole a few pills one day and got punished for it. Afterward, she didn't allow herself to play chess anymore. One day, she dropped off at the orphanage and participated in chess tournaments. She was such a talented chess player that she became famous. However, she was still addicted to drugs. One day Mr.Shibael passed away so she came back to the orphanage. This reminded her of her days back when she lived there. The teacher told his students: "Choices have consequences. Your parents had to make certain choices, you will have to make better choices than them." It's so meaningful. Because we always make many different choices, but I didn't think about it. We have to make decisions on the go, but I'm not sure I made the correct ones. Thank you for taking the time to read my long essay.
The queen's Gambit is indeed a series that receive critical acclaim, beside I heard that the performance of Anya Taylor-Joy (the main actress) was quite stunning so maybe I should get myself some time to watch it. Otherwise I hope my corrections didn't change the meaning of your text. Good job, keep it up.
3 mai 2022
I watched "Queen's Gambit" on Netflix. It was a girl's success story who became a chess champion. Before introducing my favourite line, I will explain a story because it's a part of the story. She lost her mother in front of her in a car accident. It was suicide. She was sent orphanage. She tried to learn chess in the basement, and it was only her curiosity. Mr Shibael taught her. he noticed that she is a gifted person, playing chess. The staff gave her pills, named tranquillizers, that caused her addiction. one day, she stole drugs. Therefore, she got punishment. She didn't allow herself to play chess anymore. One day, she dropped off at the orphanage and gradually participated in chess tournaments. As such a chess player, she became famous. However, She still has addicted to drugs. One day Mr Shibael passed away, and she visited the orphanage. That remained her back in the day. The teacher taught students, " choices have consequences. Your parents had a certain choice. You will have to better choice than your patients." It's so mean full. Because we always had many choices, but I didn't think about it. We had to make decisions on the fly, but I'm not sure I did it correctly. Thank you for reading the long sentences.
3 mai 2022
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