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Using a few Spanish words throughout the letters, the author clearly reveals the influence of his fellow gold miners, many of whom were apparently Latinos either arriving or already living in California.

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"By using some few words in Spanish throughout his letters, one can clearly notice the influence that his fellow gold miners had on the author. Many of them (apparently Latinos), just arriving or already living in California."

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