Once I was going to hostel, and my nephew didn't want me to go, and he was crying, so I told him ok if you don't me to go I will not go. I said this for his satisfaction and I was thinking he will sta

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Once I was going to hostel, and my nephew didn't want me to go, and he was crying, so I told him ok if you don't me to go I will not go. I said this for his satisfaction and I was thinking he will start playing again and I will escape secretly, but he replied me uncle please wait here for a while and I am bringing you a cake from supermarket.

20 sept. 2022 17:17

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Once I was going to hostel, and my nephew didn't want me to go, and he was crying, so I told him "okay, if you don't want me to go I won't go." I said this just to please him, however I thought that he would start playing again and I would be able to escape secretly, but he replied to me "uncle, please wait here for a while and I will bring you a cake from supermarket."

Good job overall, just a few minor things to change around to make it sound more fluent. I hope this helps.

20 septembre 2022

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