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I‘m learning English because I like to talk to people over the world. It broaden my perspectives. And I purely enjoy the process of learning a language. I feel very satisfied when I could express my thoughts well using new vocabularies.
14 févr. 2024 10:14
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I‘m learning English because I like to talk to people from all over the world. It broadens my perspectives. Also, I really enjoy the process of learning a language. I feel very satisfied when I can express my thoughts well using new vocabulary.
15 février 2024
I‘m learning English because I like to talk to people over the world. It broadens my perspectives. I purely enjoy the process of learning a language. I feel very satisfied when I can express my thoughts well using new words vocabulary.
"and" is conjunction of coordination so we usually don't use it to start a sentence. Be careful with the usage of tenses: "I feel I can" (present), "I felt I could" (past). Good piece of writing, keep it up.
14 février 2024
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