Cyrus Ariana
Enseignant professionnel
It has changed our life a lot.It seems that we have been sentenced to be at home most of the time.We can not go shopping Easily like before.We are always frightened of something that is waiting to harm us. I hope we will be able to conquer it soon.
14 févr. 2021 10:39
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COVID-19 has changed our lives a lot. It seems that we are forced to be at home most of the time. We cannot go shopping easily like before. We are always afraid of something that could harm us. I hope we will be able to overcome it soon.
Hi, Your paragraph is very good. There are a couple of words here that are correct but are less commonly used in these contexts. "Frightened" is used more to describe something scary, like a frightening film or a phobia of spiders. "Conquer" usually refers more to military battle.
14 février 2021
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