Sasha
Tuteur communautaire
Does this sentence make sense? But the reality appeared to decide differently.
2 oct. 2023 19:54
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Hey - gramatically, kind of. Contextually, no. 'The reality' doesn't scan right here, the article needs to go. 'Reality had something else in store [for them]' would be more idiomatic. Making abstracts the subject of the sentence only really works in fixed phrases, otherwise it just sounds a bit odd. Matt
2 octobre 2023
To make it a sentence, put a comma after "but". Reality lays waste to our brilliant plans. Reality doesn't have a mind. It cannot decide anything. That doesn't mean it can't have a mind in some poetic sense so your sentence can be said to make sense. However, your metaphor is not easy to interpret. Without context, it is puzzling. I see "reality" and "the reality" as being equally acceptable.
3 octobre 2023
No. You could say "The Universe appeared to decide differently." Americans sometimes say "the Universe" instead of "God" if they are not religious. Good luck!
3 octobre 2023
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