Today I went to the rooftop with my dog. It was my favorite place a very long time ago. There was a beautiful waning crescent moon in the sky. I had been in low spirits all evening but after watching this starry night and playing a lot with my dog, my spirits got back!
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Today I went to the rooftop with my dog. It was my favorite place (since) a very long
time ago. There was a beautiful waning crescent moon in the sky. I had been in
low spirits all evening but after watching this starry night and playing a lot
with my dog, my spirits lifted!
If it is still your favourite place, it's clearer if you insert "since." "Spirits lifted" works better here.
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