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Fictitious Situations - XI Joana has been thinking about how their behaviour is hard to change when the time is passing by. And she said that they have to pay attention to themselves for not being a hard person for their equals and majors. The first step was recording a video, because the manners showed something for which only speaking was not enough. And about the following steps, she will tell them in soon through Skype.
16 janv. 2021 14:14
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Fictitious Situations - XI Joana has been thinking about how their behaviour becomes harder to change as time passes. And she said that they have to pay attention to not make life difficult for their equals and majors (what do you mean by “majors”? Could you perhaps just say “difficult for everyone else”?). The first step was recording a video, because the video showed something for which words alone were not enough. And as for the following steps, she will tell them about them soon enough on Skype.
Hope that helps somehow!
16 janvier 2021
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