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wendy
This is a great topic is worth talking about for all the parents and children. As for parents, we hope our children focus on study at school. Regular clothes are usually very different in style and price. If children wear different clothes at school, they definitely compare their clothes to others. Maybe bully or tease will happen anytime due to clothes they wearing. On the other side, if children wear the same clothes at school, nobody would pay attention on others' clothes. In that case, teachers can be focused on teaching children without dealing with other annoying things. At home, children won't decide on what should be wear in the morning. It can make getting ready for school easily. However, the price of a school uniform is really differnet in different countries. In my country, a school uniform is much cheaper than a regular clothes. Everyone can afford it. Maybe someone can't afford it in some other countries. The disadvantage of a school uniform that I think is that it might make children feel hot in the summer or feel cold in the fall. So, school uniform should have many styles to match the different seasons.
25 sept. 2024 03:18
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This is a great topic (and is) worth talking about for all the parents and children.
As for parents, we hope our children focus on studying (their studies) at school. Regular clothes are usually very different in style and price. If children wear different
clothes at school, they definitely compare their clothes to others. Maybe bullying
or teasing will happen anytime due to clothes they are wearing. On the other side, if
children wear the same clothes at school, nobody would pay attention to others'
clothes. In that case, teachers can be focused on teaching children without
dealing with other annoying things. At home, children won't (have to) decide on what (to wear) /
should be worn in the morning. It can make getting ready for school easy/easier
However, the price of a school uniform is really different in different
countries (differs from country to country) . In my country, a school uniform is much cheaper than regular
clothes. Everyone can afford it. Maybe someone can't afford it in another
country (People can't afford it in some countries) . The disadvantage of a school uniform that I can think off , is that it might
make children feel hot in the summer or feel cold in the fall. So, school
uniform should have many styles to match the different seasons.
You did a really good job, this was enjoyable to read. Focus a little bit more on sentence construction and making sure you choose the right words for your context. Also consider the tone you want to communicate through your words.
26 septembre 2024
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wendy
Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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