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One of the best ways to improve the extreme case of temperature nowadays is to invest in renewable energy.There is tons of fabrics, polluting our atmosphere with the emissions of gases like oxonium and methane and ,unfortunately, it won't heal anytime soon.
11 mars 2023 19:40
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Here's a revised version of your sentence that's a bit clearer:
One of the best ways to address the issue of extreme temperatures today is to invest in renewable energy. There are numerous factories and other sources of pollution that contribute to emissions of gases such as carbon dioxide and methane, which harm our atmosphere and unfortunately, the damage is unlikely to heal anytime soon.
11 mars 2023
One of the best ways to improve the extreme case of temperature nowadays is to
invest in renewable energy. There are tons of fabrics in landfills, polluting our atmosphere
with the emissions of gases like oxonium and methane and unfortunately, it
won't heal anytime soon.
Tons is plural so you should use are instead of is.
You should specify what fabrics you are talking about, as fabrics themselves are not the problem so I suggested mentioning landfills.
Great job! Keep practicing 👍🏻
13 mars 2025 23:44
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Henri Fernandes
Compétences linguistiques
Anglais, Italien, Portugais
Langue étudiée
Italien
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