I was touched by a scene that a monkey drinking dirty water in a the pit at park. A biy saw it and passed the monkey a bottle of mineral water. It is do kind of the good boy.
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I was touched by a scene in which a monkey was drinking dirty water from a pit in a park. A boy saw it and gave the monkey a bottle of mineral water. The boy was so kind and thoughtful.
Level: B2/C1.
Your message is easy to understand and expresses your feelings clearly. The main difficulties were with sentence structure, articles, verb forms, and natural expressions. You also used "I was touched" correctly to describe your emotional reaction to the scene. Good work! 😊
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