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Yesterday, I went to my first part-time job. It’s an authentic Italian restaurant, and there’s so much to learn that I thought it would be tough. I’ll have to work a lot of shifts from now on to learn everything quickly, so I’ll do my best. I had the staff meal, and it tasted just like authentic Italian food—it was really delicious. I had classes starting first period today, so I was really tired. After class, I went to the gym with a friend, and in the evening, I went out for dinner with some local friends. It was a very fulfilling day. I’ll do my best again starting tomorrow.

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Yesterday, I worked my first shift at my new part-time job. It’s an authentic Italian restaurant, and there’s so much to learn that I think it will be quite challenging. I’ll have to work plenty of shifts from now on so that I can learn everything quickly, but I’ll do my best. I also had a staff meal, and it tasted just like the food you’d find in Italy. It was really delicious! Today, I had classes starting from the first period, so I was really tired. After class, I went to the gym with a friend, and in the evening, I went out for dinner with some local friends. It was a very fulfilling day, and I’ll continue to do my best from tomorrow onwards.
This is already so well written, I have made some changes to nae it sound more natural. Otherwise though you have done a great job job!

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