90 day's training: Day 35 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I've been practicing piano a lot this week. Since last week, I've had some opportunities to learn about how to improve my piano playing. (I wasn't quite sure what you meant by the last sentence) 2) These occasions motivate me very much. I want to concentrate on my tone and my way of thinking about music (or whatever you mean). 3) However I can't maintain my concentration For very long. Therefore I always start practicing piano in the mornings. 4) By the way I like watching German dramas everyday, but today I chose a movie instead them. 5) It satisfied me that I could watch a movie without subtitles.

90 day's training: Day 35 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I've been practicing the piano often this week. Since last week, I have had some opportunities to learn how to play the piano well/better. 2) These occasions motivate me very much. I want to concentrate on my tune and my way of thinking . 3) However I cannot keep my concentration for such a long time. Therefore I always start practicing piano in the mornings. 4) By the way I like watching German dramas everyday, but today I chose a movie instead. 5) It pleased me that I could watch a movie without subtitles.

Here are some suggestions to make your sentences flow more naturally: "I've been practicing piano often this week. Since last week, I’ve had some great opportunities to improve my piano playing." "I’ve been practicing often" sounds more natural here, and "I’ve had some opportunities" fits better as it emphasizes ongoing opportunities. "These opportunities motivate me a lot. I want to concentrate on my music and the way I think." "Motivate me very much" is correct, but "motivate me a lot" sounds more conversational. "The way I think" is clearer than "my thinking way." "However, I can’t concentrate for long periods, so I always start practicing piano in the mornings." "I can’t concentrate for long periods" is a more natural way to say this. The word "so" flows better here than "therefore." "By the way, I like watching German dramas every day, but today I chose a movie instead." "Every day" is the correct spacing here, and "instead" is enough without adding "them." "I felt satisfied that I could watch a movie without subtitles." "I felt satisfied" is more natural in this context.