wendy
Now, 2025 is around the corner. I see many people around me have been preparing for celebrating the New Year's Eve. Some of them try to book concert's tickets online, others want to watch a firework show.A sfor me, I am just living in 2024, because there are still a lot of work waiting for me to wrap up. Most people tend to plan the future, only a few like to review the things happened last year. I belong to the second kind of people. I need to know that what I gained and what I lost this year. Then I can know what I will want to do next year. When I review my life of last year, many people come into my mind . They help me make progress. Among them, I really want to thank the people who hurt me. They let me understand that the world is not only full of flowers and smiles,but also has failure and scorn. We just has two options for our lives, which are to be defeated or stand up to go ahead. They also help me know what I really want to be in the new year.
30 déc. 2024 03:33
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Now, 2025 is around the corner. I see that many people around me have been preparing to celebrate New Year's Eve. Some of them are trying to book concert tickets online, others want to watch a fireworks display. I am still living in 2024, because there is still a lot of work waiting for me to wrap up. Most people tend to plan the future, only a few like to review the things that happened last year. I belong to the second group of people. I need to know what I gained and what I lost this year. Then I will know what I want to do next year. When I review my life of last year, many people come into my mind . They helped me to make progress. Among them, I really want to thank the people who hurt me. They let me understand that the world is not only full of flowers and smiles, but also failure and scorn. We just have two options in our lives, which are to be defeated or stand up and move forward. They also help me know what I really want to be in the new year.
31 décembre 2024
As 2025 is around the corner, I see many people around me have been preparing for celebrating the New Year's Eve. Some of them try to book concert's tickets online, others want to watch fireworks. As for me, I am just living in 2024, because there are still a lot of work waiting for me to wrap up. Most people tend to plan their future but only a few likes to review the things that happened on the previous year. I belong to the second category because I need to know what I gained and what I lost this year so that I can know what I will want to do next year. When I review my life over the last year, many people come into my mind. They helped me make progress and among them, I really want to thank the people who hurt me. They let me understand that the world is not only full of flowers and smiles, but can also feature failure and scorn. We just have two options in life which are to be defeated or to keep our head up and move on. They also help me understand who I really want to be for the new year.
30 décembre 2024
Now, 2025 is around the corner. I see many people around me have been preparing for celebrating the New Year's Eve. Some of them try to book concert's tickets online, others want to watch a firework show.A sfor me, I am just living in 2024, because there are still a lot of work waiting for me to wrap up. Most people tend to plan the future, only a few like to review the things happened last year. I belong to the second kind of people. I need to know that what I gained and what I lost this year. Then I can know what I will want to do next year. When I review my life of last year, many people come into my mind . They help me make progress. Among them, I really want to thank the people who hurt me. They let me understand that the world is not only full of flowers and smiles,but also has failure and scorn. We just has two options for our lives, which are to be defeated or stand up to go ahead. They also help me know what I really want to be in the new year.
Your original text is thoughtful and deeply reflective—great job expressing your feelings and insights! Tip: To make your writing sound more natural, focus on using consistent tenses and smooth transitions. For example, instead of "I need to know that what I gained," you could simplify it to "I need to understand what I gained."
30 décembre 2024
Now, 2025 is just around the corner. I see many people around me preparing to celebrate New Year's Eve. Some are trying to book concert tickets online, while others want to watch a fireworks show. As for me, I'm still living in 2024 because I have a lot of work left to finish. Most people tend to focus on planning for the future, but only a few like to reflect on the past year. I belong to the second group. I need to understand what I gained and lost this year so I can decide what I want to do next year. When I look back on the past year, many people come to mind. They have helped me grow. Among them, I especially want to thank the people who hurt me. They taught me that the world isn’t just full of flowers and smiles—it also has failure and scorn. In life, we have only two choices: to be defeated or to stand up and move forward. These experiences have helped me realize who I truly want to be in the new year.
30 décembre 2024
Now, 2025 is around the corner. I see that many people around me have been preparing for celebrating New Year's Eve. Some of them try to book concert tickets online, others want to watch a firework show. As for me, I am just living in 2024, because there os still a lot of work waiting for me to wrap up. Most people tend to plan the future, only a few like to review the things happened last year. I belong to the second group of people. I need to know what I gained and what I lost this year. Then I can know what I will want to do next year. When I review my life last year, many people come into my mind . They helped me make progress. Among them, I really want to thank the people who hurt me. They helped/made me understand that the world is not only full of flowers and smiles, but also failure and scorn. We have only two options for our lives: to be defeated or to stand up to go ahead. They also helped me know what I really want to be in the new year.
Nice job! Good luck in the new year!
30 décembre 2024
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