Kanon
It’s getting colder since the beginning of this month. Lately, I have been thinking about how to spend on Christmas. I like Christmas as an event because I can see many illuminations and streets decorated for Christmas. They are beautiful and I’m able to feel warm. I have already been to see Christmas illuminations two famous places. I also like Christmas song. It makes me feel better. In Japan, it seems many people spend Christmas with partner, but I plan to hung out with my friend during the daytime and I go home after spending time with my friend to eat dinner with my family. I always eat chickens and Christmas cake every year. I also want to watch Christmas movie at night. There are many wonderful movies, so it’s difficult to choose one. I’m really looking forward to Christmas! However, I was just studying last weekend because I have a test and three presentation this week. The test is English grammar test and I have to do those presentation in English, so it’s a little hard. Today I’m going to take three classes, then study for the test again and prepare materials for the presentation. I’ll try my best.
12 déc. 2022 04:14
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It’s been getting colder since the beginning of this month. Lately, I have been thinking about how to spend Christmas. I like Christmas as an event because I can see many illuminations and streets decorated for Christmas. They are beautiful and I’m able to feel warm.(grammatically ok, but doesn't make much sense) I have already been to see Christmas illuminations in two famous places. I also like Christmas songs. It makes me feel better. In Japan, it seems many people spend Christmas with their partner, but I plan to hang out with my friend during the daytime and I go home afterwards to eat dinner with my family. I always eat chicken and Christmas cake every year. I also want to watch a Christmas movie at night. There are many wonderful movies, so it’s difficult to choose one. I’m really looking forward to Christmas! However, I was just studying last weekend because I have a test and three presentations this week. The test is an English grammar test and I have to do those presentations in English, so it’s a little hard. Today I’m going to take three classes, then study for the test again and prepare materials for the presentation. I’ll try my best.
'spend on christmas' implies spending money. You would have to say 'how much to spend on'. Pretty good overall. Mostly, just make sure to use articles when needed.
12 décembre 2022
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