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Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: – include some information about the film – explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film – inform other arrangements you will be making for watching the film Dear Xiaobo, It’s been a while since the last time we saw each other. How are you and how’s your family? Have you been up to anything new? I know you love Chinese culture and enjoy watching films. Therefore, I would like to invite you to watch a film River Elegy (Heshang) with me, which is about China. This is a really good stuff in trying to understand China. Will you be available? The film asserted that the Ming Dynasty's ban on activities alluded to the building of the Great Wall by China's first emperor Ying Zheng. The film symbolizes Chinese thinking with the "yellowness" of the Yellow River and Western thinking with the "blueness" of the ocean. After that, we can go to the hospital to get a massage. Or please let me know if you have any suggestions. Anyway, I can't wait to see you. Best wishes, Jia
15 juil. 2021 08:15
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Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: – include some information about the film – explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film – inform other arrangements you will be making for watching the film Dear Xiaobo, It’s been a while since the last time we saw each other. How are you and how’s your family? Have you been up to anything new? I know you love Chinese culture and enjoy watching films. Therefore, I would like to invite you to watch a film called River Elegy (Heshang) with me. It is about China. This is a really good stuff for those trying to understand China. Are you interested? The film asserted that the Ming Dynasty's ban on activities alluded to the building of the Great Wall by China's first emperor Ying Zheng. The film symbolizes Chinese thinking with the "yellowness" of the Yellow River and Western thinking with the "blueness" of the ocean. After that, we can go to the hospital to get a massage. Or please let me know if you have any suggestions. Anyway, I can't wait to see you. Best wishes, Jia
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16 juillet 2021
Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: – include some information about the film – explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film – inform other arrangements you will be making for watching the film Dear Xiaobo, It’s been a while since the last time we saw each other. How are you and how’s your family? Have you been up to anything new? I know you love Chinese culture and enjoy watching movies. Therefore, I would like to invite you to watch ''River Elegy'' (Heshang) with me, which is about China. This is a really good opportunity to understand better the country's culture. Will you be available? The film asserted that the Ming Dynasty's ban on activities alluded to the building of the Great Wall by China's first emperor Ying Zheng. The film symbolizes Chinese thinking with the "yellowness" of the Yellow River and Western thinking with the "blueness" of the ocean. After that, we can go to the hospital to get a massage. Or if you have any suggestions, please let me know. Anyway, I can't wait to see you. Best wishes, Jia
15 juillet 2021
Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: – include some information about the film – explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film – inform other arrangements you will be making for watching the film Dear Xiaobo, It’s been a while since the last time we saw each other. How are you and how’s your family? Have you been up to anything new? I know you love Chinese culture and enjoy watching films. Therefore, I would like to invite you to watch( a film entitled) River Elegy (Heshang) with me, which is about China. That movie is very informative in trying to understand China. Will you be available? The film asserted that the Ming Dynasty's ban on activities alluded to the building of the Great Wall by China's first emperor Ying Zheng. The film symbolizes Chinese thinking with the "yellowness" of the Yellow River and Western thinking with the "blueness" of the ocean. After that, we can go to the hospital to get a massage. Please let me know if you have any suggestions. Anyway, I can't wait to see you. Best wishes, Jia
Is it a "film" or a documentary film? Excellent....not much to correct here! As another poster asked do you get massages in a hospital or a special clinic? Is it a "spa" type place? (Massage parlor has negative conniptions in the US)..
15 juillet 2021
Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country. In the letter, you should: – include some information about the film – explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film – inform other arrangements you will be making for watching the film Dear Xiaobo, It’s been a while since the last time we saw each other. How are you and how’s your family? Have you been up to anything new? I know you love Chinese culture and enjoy watching films. Therefore, I would like to invite you to watch a film River Elegy (Heshang) with me, which is about China. This is a really good way in which to understand Chinese thinking. When are you available? The film asserted that the Ming Dynasty's ban on activities alluded to the building of the Great Wall by China's first emperor Ying Zheng. The film symbolizes Chinese thinking with the "yellowness" of the Yellow River and Western thinking with the "blueness" of the ocean. After that, we can go to the hospital to get a massage. Or please let me know if you have any suggestions. Anyway, I can't wait to see you. Best wishes, Jia
Very good. "Really good stuff" is more in the present such as when eating you can say "aww yeh this is some really good stuff". Or this essay you wrote is some really good stuff!! I'm not sure whether in China you get a massage at the hospital or whether you would call it a massage parlour in English.
15 juillet 2021
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