There's nothing wrong with your structure. It's simple but clear. You could add words to embellish it, and to soften it, especially for well educated native speakers, but then it would be less clear for people with poor English, and less respected by people who value simplicity for accessibility.
If you can provide the surrounding sentences, then maybe we can improve this sentence to fit within them, but as it stands, as a standalone sentence, I wouldn't change anything.