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CAMBRIDGE C1 ESSAY PRACTICE: What policies can we follow to reduce traffic in the town centre? The congestion in the town centre is an extremely serious issue which need to be addressed. But how? I firmly believe that public transport and cycle paths are the best solutions that we could think of in terms of sustainability. WHY CYCLE PATHS? Cycling has always been considered as a great activity with regard to the reduction of pollution. Furthermore, this choice could also pave the way for a better understanding of the benefits that this sport can bring. In fact, cycling is healthy and environmentally-friendly. Unfortunately, they are not so many in number. WHY PUBLIC TRANSPORT? After attending the local council meeting, I found myself pondering over a participant's opinion. According to her, despite the existence of buses and trams, very few people make use of them. Frankly, I couldn't agree more. In fact, public transport is often synonym with dirt and neglect, and this makes it undoubtely unattractive in people's eyes. Although this being true, we can't forget how significant a role it plays in the decrease of traffic. I strongly affirm that the promotion of cycle paths and public transit would not only lead the way for a better lifestyle, but it would certainly make the difference for the environment and the livability of our towns as well. In addition to that, car accidents could be remarkably reduced. But under no circumstances can we ignore the urge to improve our public transportation and to build more cycle paths, which is essential if we intend to take advantage of them. So, what are we waiting for? Let's act! P.S: This text is meant to be formal. Please feel free to make it better in terms of register :) Thanks everybody!
19 déc. 2020 17:14
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CAMBRIDGE C1 ESSAY PRACTICE: What policies can we follow to reduce traffic in the town centre? The congestion in town centres is an extremely serious issue which needs to be addressed. But how? I firmly believe that public transport and cycle paths are the best solutions in terms of sustainability. WHY CYCLE PATHS? Cycling has always been considered as a great activity with regard to the reduction of pollution. Furthermore, this choice could also pave the way for a better understanding of the benefits that this sport can bring. In fact, cycling is healthy and environmentally-friendly. Unfortunately, cycle paths are currently not so many in number. WHY PUBLIC TRANSPORT? After attending the local council meeting, I found myself pondering over a participant's opinion. According to her, despite the existence of buses and trams, very few people make use of them. Frankly, I couldn't agree more. In fact, public transport is often synonymous with dirt and neglect, and this makes it undoubtedly unattractive in people's eyes. Despite this, we can't forget how significant a role it plays in the decreasing of traffic. I strongly believe that the promotion of cycle paths and public transit would not only lead the way to a better lifestyle, but it would also certainly make a difference for the environment and the liveability of our towns. In addition to this, car accidents could be remarkably reduced. But under no circumstances can we ignore the urge to improve our public transportation and to build more cycle paths, which are essential if we intend to take advantage of them. So, what are we waiting for? Let's act! P.S: This text is meant to be formal. Please feel free to make it better in terms of register :) Thanks everybody!
Great job! The tone is appropriate for this exam.
19 décembre 2020
CAMBRIDGE C1 ESSAY PRACTICE: What policies can we follow to reduce traffic in the town center? The congestion in the town center is an extremely serious issue which needs to be addressed. But how? I firmly believe that public transport and cycle paths are the best solutions that we could think of in terms of sustainability. WHY CYCLE PATHS? Cycling has always been considered a great activity for the reduction of pollution. Furthermore, this choice could also pave the way for a better understanding of the benefits that this sport can bring. Cycling is healthy and environmentally-friendly. Unfortunately, they are not so many. WHY PUBLIC TRANSPORT? After attending the local council meeting, I found myself pondering over a participant's opinion. According to her, despite the existence of buses and trams, very few people make use of them. Frankly, I couldn't agree more. Public transport is often synonym with dirt and neglect, and this makes it undoubtedly unattractive in people's eyes. Although this being true, we can't forget how significant a role it plays in the decrease in traffic. I strongly affirm that the promotion of cycle paths and public transit would not only lead the way for a better lifestyle, but it would certainly make a difference for the environment and the livability of our towns as well. In addition to that, car accidents could be remarkably reduced. But under no circumstances can we ignore the urge to improve our public transportation and to build more cycle paths, which is essential if we intend to take advantage of them. So, what are we waiting for? Let's act! P.S: This text is meant to be formal. Please feel free to make it better in terms of register :) Thanks, everybody!
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19 décembre 2020
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