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I have been doing yoga one hour almost every day for one year in a yoga gym . It really brings me too much benefit. Like my back becomes more straight than before. I was humped . So I decided to change it through doing yoga. There are so many asanas that can help me get rid of the problem and bad habits . I am so glad that I make it with my hard work. Furthermore I am more self-disciplined as I can keep doing yoga every day. Second I have peace of mind . Because I won’t compete myself with others when others do the asana better than me. I know every body has their advantages and disadvantages. We should accept our disadvantages then improve it. Because our physical conditions are different. Accordingly there is no compatibility with others. Instead we can complete us with ourselves. As long as we improved , that’s excellent in a way
31 mai 2022 03:51
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I have been doing an hour of yoga almost every day for a year now in a yoga gym . It is very beneficial for me, for instance my back has become more straight than it was before. I was humped . So I decided to change it through doing yoga. There are so many asanas that can help me to get rid of the problem and bad habits . I am so glad that I made it through my hard work. Furthermore I am more self-disciplined as I can keep doing yoga every day. Secondly I have peace of mind, because I don't have to compete with others who can do the asana better than me. I know everybody has their own advantages and disadvantages. We should accept our disadvantages and improve them. Because our physical conditions are different. Accordingly there is no comparison with others. Instead we can be complete as we are, as long as we continue to grow and on its own is excellent.
Work on improving your grammar and use conjunctions to join sentences. Some parts are not easy for the reader to follow. Good job with using a wide range of vocabulary. Keep it up!
31 mai 2022
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