I cooked fried oysters (the Japanese name is “kakifurai”)at first. I've never cooked food because It's difficult to control the heat and time when it's frying. And I also make tar sauce. I wonder if

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I cooked fried oysters (the Japanese name is “kakifurai”)at first. I've never cooked food because It's difficult to control the heat and time when it's frying. And I also make tar sauce. I wonder if fried oysters (kakifurai) are a Japanese dish or not. anyway, it was so delicious and I'm going to cook again.

17 janv. 2025 12:09

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I cooked fried oysters (called "kakifurai" in Japanese) for the first time. I’ve never tried cooking fried food before because it’s difficult to control the heat and timing while frying. I also made tartar sauce to go with it. I wonder if fried oysters (kakifurai) are considered a Japanese dish or not. Anyway, they were so delicious, and I’m definitely going to make them again!

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17 janv. 2025 16:18

I made fried oysters (the Japanese name is “kakifurai”) at first. I've never cooked food because it's difficult to control the heat and length of time when it's frying. And I also made tartar sauce. I wonder if fried oysters (kakifurai) are a Japanese dish or not. Anyway, it was so delicious and I'm going to cook again.

17 janv. 2025 13:02

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