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In my country, people celebrate the new year has each different way in different places because my country is very big, the amount of people is enormous and there are many different race and diversity cultures. However, we have a common activity to celebrate the new year that is having a family reunion dinner, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and playing the firecrackers.
13 janv. 2024 07:28
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In my country, people celebrate the new year has each different way in different places because my country is very big, the amount of people is enormous and there are many different race and diversity cultures.
--In my country, people celebrate the new year in many different ways due to the enormous population and variety of diverse cultures.
However, we have a common activity to celebrate the new year that is having a family reunion dinner, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and playing the firecrackers.
--However, common activities to celebrate the new year which we all share are having a family-reunion dinner, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and setting off firecrackers.
Great job, Mi! I changed the sentence structure of the first one because there were some run-ons and fragments. I also fixed up the second sentence by using a noun-phrase at the beginning and a common phrasal verb with firecrackers "set off" or you could use "light".
13 janvier 2024
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Mi
Compétences linguistiques
Chinois (mandarin), Anglais
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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