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Adejoke Azeez
Today, after i woke up, i pray ,eat and wash my dishes afterwards i went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while after waking up and shower and took a short trip to my elder sister place cause we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
24 mai 2022 22:14
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✓ woke up
pray → prayed
eat → ate
wash → washed
after waking up and shower
→ ... and showerING
my elder sister place
→ my elder sister'S place
we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow
→ we... HAVE a plan to go to the market tomorrow
If you say you "had" a plan, I understand that you no longer have this plan.
It would be best to break this post up into at least three different sentences using punctuation.
25 mai 2022
Today, after I woke up, prayed, ate and washed my dishes, I went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while. After waking up, I took a shower and visited my elder sister because we both had a plan to go the market tomorrow.
25 mai 2022
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Today, after I woke up, I prayed, ate and washed my dishes. Afterwards I went to do my laundry and took a nap for a while. After waking up and showering I took a short trip to my older sister's place, because we plan to go the market together tomorrow.
Here is another try to do it in the way which italki expects.
25 mai 2022
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