The spring festival is approaching, almost every company is busy with preparing the programs for celebrating the festival. So does our company. Now our colleagues are in the midst of intense rehearsal

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The spring festival is approaching, almost every company is busy with preparing the programs for celebrating the festival. So does our company. Now our colleagues are in the midst of intense rehearsals ，everyone is enthusiastic and energetic. They’d like to show their best side in front of the leaders and others. The gala is scheduled tomorrow. I hope everyone can be satisfied with their performances and bring happiness to each other.

15 janv. 2025 07:50

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The spring festival is approaching. Almost every company is busy preparing their programs for celebrating the festival. Our company is preparing as well. Our colleagues are in the midst of intense rehearsals. Everyone is enthusiastic and energetic. They want to show their best side in front of the leaders and others. The gala is scheduled for tomorrow. I hope everyone will be satisfied with their performances and bring happiness to each other.

DOES does not match the previou sentence, so "SO DOES . . . etc" doesn't work. Don't connect separate ideas with a commas. They should be separate sentences, unless you make a meaningful connection between then with a conjuction.

16 janvier 2025

The spring festival is approaching, almost every company is busy preparing their celebration programs and so does our company. Now our colleagues are in the midst of intense rehearsals and everyone is enthusiastic and energetic. They’d like to show their best side to their leaders and colleagues. The gala is scheduled for tomorrow. I hope everyone will be satisfied with their performances and bring happiness to each other.

15 janvier 2025

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