Molly
Today, I am happy I had two corrections for my last post. My happiness is simple. Sometimes I am just happy because I can keep discipline and be corrected by lovely Italki-ers. I am so grateful and appriciate that. Hope I am lucky enough to be corrected this post.
15 oct. 2020 02:02
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Today, I am happy because I got two corrections of my last post. My happiness is simple. Sometimes I am just happy because I can be disciplined and be corrected by lovely iTalki users. I am so grateful and appreciative of that. Hope I am lucky enough to have this post corrected.
15 octobre 2020
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Today, I am happy because I had two corrections for my last post. My happiness is simple. Sometimes I am just happy because I can keep discipline and be corrected by lovely Italki-ers/italki users. I am so grateful and I appreciate that. Hope I am lucky enough to have this post corrected.
Well done Molly! Basically, you don’t need any corrections. I read your post with pleasure. Have a good day!
15 octobre 2020
Today, I am happy I had two corrections for my last post. My happiness is simple. Sometimes I am just happy because I can keep discipline and be corrected by lovely Italki-ers. I am so grateful and appriciate that. Hope I am lucky enough to be corrected this post.
Adding to the corrections you have already received, it would sound far more natural to say "I am easily pleased" instead of "My happiness is simple". Other than that, and what the others have already mentioned, great job! :)
19 octobre 2020
Today, I am happy I had two corrections for my last post. My happiness is simple. Sometimes I am just happy because I can keep discipline and be corrected by lovely Italki-ers. I am so grateful and appriciate that. Hope I am lucky enough to be corrected this post.
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16 octobre 2020
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