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An international car-free day is could be an effective way to reduce air pollution. We won’t receive a result quickly but with time I believe we will earn the success. I’m convinced that one unique day can’t change the livestyle of the people but if we celebrate this day regularly at least one time in the year it could be successfully. Because I think this celebrity gives them an important political weighting. And this political weighting I guess will be start a huge avalanche in population because the media will report about it. The social media will reflect it shortly the people will discuss about the effects of car-free-life. So they will be reduce to drive their cars or if not their might be change to an electric car for reducing air pollution. I my opinion for long term it will be effectively to celebrate an international car-free day in the word. We have only one word and we should share this wherever we could.
10 nov. 2021 21:16
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An international car-free day could be an effective way to reduce air
pollution. Obviously/ Naturally, we won’t achieve a result quickly, but with time I believe we will
reach success. I’m convinced that one day only can’t change the lifestyle
of people, but if we observe this day regularly, at least once a
year, it could be successful. This is because I think that if this event gained notoriety, it would gain
important political influence, which I guess would
start a huge avalanche in popularity because the media would report about it.
Additionally, social media would soon promote it, so people would discuss the benefits
of a car-free life. Consequently, they might reduce the time they drive their cars, or if not, they
might change to an electric car to reduce air pollution. In my opinion, in the
long term it would be effective to hold an international car-free day around
the world. After all, we only have one world and so we should share these opportunities to care for it wherever we can .
An interesting writing task. I changed some of the words which hold a slightly different meaning in English and which sounded translated. Also, when we imagine a possible situation and the results, it is best to use “would”, not will ( unless you are certain it will happen).
If this is a formal writing text, contractions should be avoided. ( I’m/ it’s). Remember also to connect your points. (cohesion) 🤓👍
10 novembre 2021
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Senem
Compétences linguistiques
Anglais, Allemand
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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