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The best gift parents can give to their children is time. Nowadays, due to hectic schedule parents won't spend time with their children. It's truly said that "time is money" so during adolescence proper guidance and support is required to prevent mistakes. A wrong verdict may lead to a drastic future. Love, affection and education should be given to them. Education enlightens the future. However, esteem, patience, morality, and being a good listener are some of the qualities given to them. The responsibilities should be given to the children at an early age so that they can withstand the crises.
13 juin 2021 19:12
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The best gift parents can give to their children is time. Nowadays, due to hectic schedules parents can't spend time with their children. It's truly said that "time is money" so during adolescence, proper guidance and support is required to prevent mistakes. A wrong verdict may lead to a drastic future. Love, affection and education should be given to them. Education enlightens the future. However, esteem, patience, morality, and being a good listener are some of the qualities given to them. The responsibilities should be given to the children at an early age so that they can withstand the crises.
Your tone needs to be the same throughout your writing. For example, are you writing about parents, as you did in the beginning, or in general, as you did later on? Otherwise, good job!
14 juin 2021
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The best gift parents can give to their children is time. Nowadays, due to
hectic schedules parents don't spend much time with their children. It's said
that "time is money" and during adolescence proper guidance and support is
required to prevent mistakes. A wrong decision may lead to a drastically different future.
Love, affection and education should be given aswellas education to enlighten their
futures. Of course, esteem, patience, morality, and being a good listener are also some
of the qualities they are embued with. Finally, responsibilities should be given to the
children from an early age so that they learn to withstand crises.
Well done! 👋
Keep up the practise 📚🌈
13 juin 2021
1
The best gift parents can give to their children is time. Nowadays, due to
hectic schedule, parents won't spend time with their children. It's truly said
that "time is money" so during adolescence, proper guidance and support is
required to prevent mistakes. A wrong verdict may lead to a drastic future.
Love, affection and education should be given to them. Education enlightens the
future. However, esteem, patience, morality, and being a good listener are some
of the qualities given to them. The responsibilities should be given to the
children at an early age so that they can withstand the crises.
Good job Apoorva!
13 juin 2021
1
The best gift parents can give to their children is time.
Nowadays, due to hectic schedule they don't spend so much time with their children. It's truly said that "time is money". During adolescence, proper guidance and support are required to prevent mistakes.
A wrong verdict may lead to a drastic future.
Love, affection and education should be given to them. Culture enlightens future. However, esteem, patience, morality, and being a good listener are some of the qualities should be provided to them as well.
The responsibilities should be given to the
children at an early age so that they can withstand the crises.
13 juin 2021
1
The best gift parents can give to their children is time. Nowadays, due to
hectic schedules, parents won't spend time with their children. It's truly said
that "time is money" since during adolescence proper guidance and support is
required to prevent mistakes. The wrong verdict may lead to a bad future.
Love, affection and education should be given to them. Education enlightens the
future. However, self-esteem, patience, morality, and being a good listener are some
of the qualities that should be given to them. Responsibilities should be given to the
children at an early age so that they can withstand crises.
“Drastic” simply means “extreme”
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Apoorva
Compétences linguistiques
Anglais, Marathi
Langue étudiée
Anglais, Marathi
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