Akram Alwajih
in below email Use present perfect is correct or what fit tense i should use ? is this email correct and Formal ? Before the meeting, comprohansive preparations #have conducted to ensure conducting productive and meaningful discussions . This including researching the mission of international humanitarian organization, ongoing projects, concentration areas . Additionally, our team #has identified prospective collaboration areas and prepared evident agenda for the meeting.
7 déc. 2023 17:21
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The email you provided contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Here's a revised version: "Comprehensive preparations have been conducted before the meeting to ensure the facilitation of productive and meaningful discussions. This includes researching the mission of the international humanitarian organization, ongoing projects, and focus areas. Additionally, our team has identified prospective collaboration areas and prepared a clear agenda for the meeting." Changes made: "have conducted" was changed to "have been conducted" to use the present perfect passive voice. "conducting" was changed to "facilitation" for clarity. "This including" was changed to "This includes" for proper grammar. "concentration areas" was changed to "focus areas" for better clarity. "prepared evident agenda" was changed to "prepared a clear agenda" for better phrasing.
7 décembre 2023
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