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My favorite movie is Harry Potter. I have been watching this movie since a few days ago. It's fascinating. Besides, it's ‌an English movie. So, it's very convenient for me to improve my English skills. I can learn new expressions, their accents and I can watch the movie too.
10 août 2024 16:44
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My favorite movie is Harry Potter. I have been watching this movie since a few days ago. It's fascinating. Also, it's ‌an English movie. So, it's a very convenient way for me to improve my English skills. I can learn new expressions and their accents, and I can watch the movie too.
"Besides" indicates that you are setting aside one idea to talk about something else. It works a bit like "anyway.". "Also" works better here. "It's very convenient for me to improve my English skills" implies that improving your English skills is convenient. Great job with this overall!
11 août 2024
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My favorite movie is Harry Potter. I have been watching this movie since a few days ago. It's fascinating. Besides, it's ‌an English movie. So, it's very convenient for me to improve my English skills. I can learn new expressions, their accents and I can watch the movie too.
10 août 2024
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