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It's very hot today, just like yesterday. It's been raining and cold for a long time, so I'm very happy to finally feel the summer. But, summer in Japan is very humid and I get exhausted when I go outside. I want to stay healthy so I don’t get sick from the big changes in temperature.
17 juin 2025 04:10
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It’s very hot today, just like yesterday. It had been rainy and cold for a long time, so I’m really happy to finally feel summer. But summer in Japan is very humid, and I get tired quickly when I go outside. I want to stay healthy so I don’t get sick from the sudden changes in temperature.
Alternative Version (more natural): Today is hot again, just like yesterday. After so many cold and rainy days, it feels great to finally enjoy some summer weather. But Japan’s summer is really humid, and going outside makes me feel exhausted. I’m trying to stay healthy so I don’t get sick from the sudden temperature changes. Tip: Use “had been” when describing a long past condition before a recent change (past perfect). “Sudden changes” is a clearer and more natural phrase than “big changes” when talking about weather. “Feel summer” is okay but “enjoy summer weather” sounds more fluent.
17 juin 2025 09:56
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Compétences linguistiques
Anglais, Japonais
Langue étudiée
Anglais
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