Eira
Please help me correct my grammar. This is a speaking test. If possible, please help me shorten it, tks u The invention of the Internet has significantly changed people's lives, which was unthinkable many years ago. The Internet helps connect people from all around the globe within a nanosecond. In the past, it would take ages for us to send and receive messages from someone, as mailing was the only means of communication back then. However, thanks to the Internet, we can now send messages and make calls immediately. Moreover, we can even communicate and work with people from different parts of the world without any barriers. And of course, it is impossible not to mention the recreational and educational values that the Internet brings. People can now learn new skills and pursue online courses from the comfort of their homes. Many people can find useful information and necessary knowledge on the Internet. It saves us a lot of time to search on the websites instead of going to the library and turning every single page of countless books to get what we need. E-commerce has also flourished, and people can buy and sell products online without leaving their homes. Overall, the Internet has brought people closer together, and connecting and collaborating globally is easier with it
8 déc. 2023 14:38
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Hello Eira. Your text is grammatically correct and free of spelling errors. Congratulations! As for the summary that you asked, here you go: The Internet has changed people’s lives significantly. It connects people from all around the world within a nanosecond, allowing us to send messages and make calls immediately. We can even communicate and work with people from different parts of the world without any barriers. The Internet also provides recreational and educational values, allowing people to learn new skills and pursue online courses from the comfort of their homes. E-commerce has flourished, and people can buy and sell products online without leaving their homes. Overall, the Internet has brought people closer together and made global collaboration easier.
8 décembre 2023
The invention of the internet, unthinkable many years ago, has significantly changed our lives. It connects people all over the globe within seconds. It would take ages to send and receive messages when mail was the only means of communication. However, thanks to the internet, we can now send messages and make calls immediately. We can even communicate and work with people from different parts of the world without any barriers. (saying both "moreover" and "even" is repetitious) It goes without saying that the internet provides recreational and educational opportunities. People can now learn new skills and pursue online courses from the comfort of their own homes. They can find useful information and necessary knowledge at their fingertips. Rather than going to a library and turning the pages of countless books, we have the time saving choice to search websites. E-commerce has also flourished, and people can buy and sell products online without leaving their homes. Overall, the global internet has brought people closer together, while allowing them to easily connect and collaborate.
9 décembre 2023
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