Would you check my diary and let me know if it needs to be change.
Recently, I'm slacking off writting diary so I refrected. Today I took English lesson on Italki. At first I was nervous but I was relaxing endding. It was bad that I coudn't listen, so from now on I wanna improve my listening skills.
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Would you check my diary and let me know if it needs to be changed.
Recently, I'm have been slacking off writting (writing) my diary so I refrected.
Today I took an English lesson on Italki. At first I was nervous, but I was relaxing by the endding. It was bad that I couldn't listen, so from now on I wanna improve my listening skills.
Notes:
have been - Use of present perfect for talking about something that started in the past and continued through the present. (Up until now.)
* you could also say, "Recently, I was slacking off writing my diary."
refrected - I'm not sure what you mean here. Maybe "so today I reflected", as in thinking about your day for your diary entry?
wanna - Perfectly fine for casual spoken English, or texting to friends. Native speakers still usually write "want to" instead of "wanna."
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