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Garlic & Onion Garlic and Onion. In the city the refrigerator had been prescribed a variety of vegetables. They lived together and enjoyed a simple vegetable weekdays. But the shelf above lived militant pounds of fruit. They were very angry because of the high content of vitamin C, and not very fond of when the lights in the refrigerator. The most important of all the vegetables were onion-grandmother. She was the oldest and most wise. It was a great granddaughter - Onion. She was the prettiest girl in the whole refrigerator. And at the other edge of the shelf lived a noble and a very educated guy Garlic. He loved the girl Onion, but did not consider himself worthy. Once the Onion went for a walk with his grandmother. But it fell into the trap that made the sworn enemies of vegetables - fruits. Onion-grandmother immediately rushed to the assistance of the vegetables. And at this time to trap fruit came and took Onion to him. Of all vegetables, Onion decided to save only the garlic. He had single-handedly collected in a way to save Onion. But he was a friend of the Prince-spaghetti, which only decided to help him in trouble. At night, when everyone was asleep, went down to the fruit Garlic on a shelf spaghetti. Then he hid until the spaghetti switched the sensor. The fridge started to melt ice and water flooding conceived the bottom shelf. On a shelf in fruit panic. All the running and no one could understand what had happened. All forgot about Onion. Garlic stole it and released. For spaghetti they have climbed back together. Fruits continued to sink. But garlic pity them and switched the sensor again. Since then the Onion and Garlic have lived happily ever after, and Onion never came across an evil fruit.

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Garlic & Onion

Garlic and Onion.
In the city the refrigerator had been prescribed a variety of vegetables. They lived together and enjoyed a simple vegetable weekdays. But on the shelf above lived militant pounds of fruit. They were very angry, because of the high content of vitamin C, and not very fond of when the lights in the refrigerator.
The most important of all the vegetables were was Onion-grandmother. She was the oldest and most wisest. It There was a great granddaughter - Onion. She was the prettiest girl in the whole refrigerator. And at the other edge of the shelf lived a noble and a very educated guy named Garlic. He loved the girl Onion, but did not consider himself worthy.
Once the Onion went for a walk with his her grandmother. But it she fell into the a trap that made by the sworn enemies of vegetables - Fruits. Onion-grandmother immediately rushed to the assistance of the vegetables. And But at this time to trap Fruit came and took Onion to him them. Of all the vegetables, Onion only Garlic decided to save only the garlic Onion. He had single-handedly collected in decided on a way to save Onion. But he was a friend of the prince - Spaghetti, which who only decided to help him Garlic in his trouble. At night, when everyone was asleep, Garlic went down to the fruit Garlic on a shelf with Spaghetti. Then he hid until the Spaghetti switched off the sensor. The fridge started to melt. iceand Flooding water flooding conceived collected on the bottom shelf. On a their shelf, in Fruit panicked. All the Fruit were running about, and no one could understand what had happened. All of them forgot about Onion. Garlic stole it her away and released her. ForWith Spaghetti, they have climbed back together. Fruits continued to sink. But Garlic took pity on them and switched the sensor back again. Since then the Onion and Garlic have lived happily ever after, and Onion never came across an evil fruit.

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