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homework If I can be given a chance of spending the day with anyone, I would choose Jesus. Because, only Jesus can make the day most meaningful. For a long time,I have been seeking the convincing answer to questions, such as "why there is so much unfairness going on in the world. The good can't get blessing while the bad get what they don't deserve?", "why is there so much distress remain in the world?". Those questions have been bewildering me very long. I can't find the satisfactory answers on my own. And now I would like to use the chance to get those answers from Jesus. Moreover, I would like to ask Jesus to take me to heaven and hell. The story of heaven and hell have been going around for thousands of years but no one claim to have seen them for sure. All I heard is just some description that no one can confirm. The mystery and the splendid scenes of heaven and hell is so attractive that I want to see them with my own eyes. In addition, I want to ask Jesus for the code that people should live by and the universal principle that people use to judge everything and all people. Every one need a code or a principle to live by. It is crucial for all of us to follow the correct codes and principles because the misleading ones could have destructive impact on ourselves and people around us. It is sensible to get them from a wise and reliable man, and I think that man is only Jesus. Consequently, I would choose Jesus if I could be given a chance to spend the day with anyone.
14 nov. 2011 14:10
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If I could be given a chance to spend the day with anyone, I would choose Jesus, since only Jesus could make the day most meaningful.

For a long time, I have been seeking the answers to questions, such as: "Why is there so much unfairness going on in the world?  Why is it that the good can't get blessings while the bad get what good things they don't deserve?", "Why is there so much distress remain in the world?" Those questions have been bewildering me for a very long time. I can not find the satisfactory answers on my own. And now I would like to use the chance to get those answers from Jesus.

Moreover, I would like to ask Jesus to take show me to heaven and hell. The story of heaven and hell have has been going around for thousands of years, but no one claims to have seen them for sure. All I have heard is just some description that no one can confirm. The mystery and the splendid scenes of heaven and hell is so attractive that are something I want to see them with my own eyes.

In addition, I want to ask Jesus for the code that people should live by and the universal principle that people should use to judge everything and all people. Every one needs a code or a principle to live by. It is crucial for all of us to follow the right correct codes and principles because the wrong misleading ones could have a destructive impact on ourselves and the people around us. It is sensible to get those codes and principles them from a wise and reliable man, and I think the only man who meets those requirements is only Jesus.

Consequently, I would choose Jesus if I could be given a chance to spend the day with anyone, because...

19 novembre 2011

homework

If I could be given a chance to spend the day with anyone, I would choose Jesus, since only Jesus could make the day most meaningful.

For a long time, I have been seeking the answers to questions, such as: "Why is there so much unfairness going on in the world?  Why is it that the good can't get blessings while the bad get what good things they don't deserve?", "Why is there so much distress remain in the world?" Those questions have been bewildering me for a very long time. I can not find the satisfactory answers on my own. And now I would like to use the chance to get those answers from Jesus.

Moreover, I would like to ask Jesus to take show me to heaven and hell. The story of heaven and hell have has been going around for thousands of years,

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but no one claim to have seen them for sure. All I heard is just some description that no one can confirm. The mystery and the splendid scenes of heaven and hell is so attractive that I want to see them with my own eyes.

In addition, I want to ask Jesus for the code that people should live by and the universal principle that people use to judge everything and all people. Every one need a code or a principle to live by. It is crucial for all of us to follow the correct codes and principles because the misleading ones could have destructive impact on ourselves and people around us. It is sensible to get them from a wise and reliable man, and I think that man is only Jesus.

Consequently, I would choose Jesus if I could be given a chance to spend the day with anyone.

15 novembre 2011
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