A love poem (written by me)
This poem was written by me in italian language (I'm italian). Therefore, it hasn't same emphasis that has in italian. However, I've tried to traslate in english best possible. Good read!!
In the night I look at the stars
and you are in my mind.
I think how my life would have been
if I had not known;
if I had lived moments of infinity happiness;
if I had known real love
and real join living.
The stars are witnesses of what
I can fell in my heart
and the hope assigned them,
the hope that our love keeps forever,
goes beyond the ends of the time and of the space
and wins the barriers of sensible.
Real love is as the infinity:
you can’t know when it was born
and when will end.
Do you like it?
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It is beautiful poem.
May you both have a lasting relationship
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I liked it
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Your poem is full of beautiful symbols.I like it. :))
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That is very good Antonio :-) I like it !
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Thank you everyone. You are nice :))
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