Composition 'Good clothes open all doors'. Please, check it out.
It is not a secret, that a lot many of us, on meeting a new people, person, at first will look first at his their clothes and pay attention to his appearance. Certainly, dressing to the "tees" helps us to feel more self-confident ourselves. and express yourself. However, is it right that clothes should open all doors?
From my point of view, how we dress makes a statement of who we are. clothes are able to help us on our life way. We can show people around us It defines who we are with our appearance. And of course, What we wear clothes makes it easier for others to understand us easier, since they cannot see what is inside our hearts or hear the thoughts in our minds. We will not put It is out of the norm to wear a tuxedo if we are just going out for a stroll, non suit if we are going to go for a walk and we will hardly find someone who puts donning on T-shirt and shorts for official and formal situations. meeting. Therefore, it is important to choose clothes correctly have the proper attire for the occasion. It certainly will help open doors. and then we can easily say that it will help us to open any doors.
On the other hand, there are those a lot of people in world, who guess believe that clothes maketh not a man. are not as important as Qualities such as spiritual values, person’s character and skills are more important. I cannot help agreeing with this opinion, but even so, clothes keep on the way we dress playsing a huge role in our lives life. You will never get a high-paying job top position in any company, if you do not comply with their 1 standards in your appearance.
Therefore, I think it is right to say that clothes correct dressing open all doors.
Certainly, it hinges on you what dress you wear and how you want to look like. Nevertheless, do not forget that clothes can help you on your life way. This is redundant. Your last sentence of the previous paragraph is good enough as conclusion.
1. I agree with your generalization of dressing up. However, not in the details. You have to dress PROPERLY. "Properly" means different things for different situations. You will not dress up in a suit and tie if you are being interviewed for a modeling position for some sporting advertisment!
The only time I dresses up in a suit and tie is for my interview. HOWEVER, in my industry, I wear my TENNIS SHOES with the formal attire. It tells the interview that though I may conform to the software standards, I am still CREATIVE as an individual. I do not tie my hair in a ponytail either.
It all depends on the situation and environment. This is what we call, "first impressions". I WILL NEVER EVER dress up to impress a girl, just my personality shall be able to wow them. If not, I will never know if she likes me for myself or what I represent :)
Composition: 'Good Clothes Open All Doors'. Please, check it out.
It is not a secret, that many of us, upon meeting a someone new person, at first look first at his clothes and pay attention to his/her appearance. Certainly, the way we dress helps us to feel more self-confident and express ourselves. However, is it true that clothes open all doors?
From my point of view, clothes are able to help us on our the path of life way. We can show who we are to people around us by our appearance. And Of course, what we wear makes it easier. We would not put on a suit if we were going to go for a walk and we would hardly find someone who puts on a T-shirt and shorts for an official meeting. Therefore, it is important to choose clothes correctly, and then we can easily say that it will help us to open many doors.
There is a certain strict word(clause)-order in sentences, which I repaired in the second sentence. Also, because you are speaking purely hypothetically, use <em>would</em>.
On the other hand, there are many people in world, who assume that clothes are not as important as spiritual values, a person’s character, and one's skills. I cannot help but agreeing with this opinion, yet even so, clothes keep on continue to playing a huge role in our lives. You will never get a high-paying job in any company, if you do not comply with the standards in regarding your appearance. Therefore, I think it is correct to say that clothes do open all doors.
The <em>but</em> in the second sentence has the meaning of "<em>except</em>". Look around for other examples. It's quite a nice little turn of phrase.
The <em>do</em> in the last sentence is for emphasis. bacause the whole parapraph deals with the opposing opinion, it's appropriate to put an emphasis here.
Some of the commas were unnecessary. Surprisingly, "clean" English has a serious aversion to commas. Whether or not we use them depends on the word order and how we feed the information to the reader.
Certainly, it hinges on you what dress you wear and how you want to look like. Nevertheless, do not forget that clothes can help you on your life's way.
Hope the corrections are clear enough.
Composition 'Good clothes open all doors'. Please, check it out.
It is not a secret that in meeting a new person many of us remark at first sight his clothes and his appearance. Certainly, dressing helps us to feel more self-confident and express ourselves. However, is it actually that clothes open all doors?
From my point of view, clothes are able to help us on our way of life. We can show people around us who we are with our appearance. And of course, clothes make it easier. We will not put on suit if we are going to go for a walk and we will hardly find someone who puts on T-shirt and shorts for official meeting. Therefore, it is important to choose clothes correctly and then we can easily say that it will help us to open any doors.
On the other hand, there is a lot of people in the world, who believe that clothes are not as important as spiritual values, person’s character and skills. I cannot help agreeing with this opinion, but even so, clothes keep on playing a huge role in our life. You will never get a high-paying job in any company, if you do not comply with the standards in your appearance. Therefore, I think it is right to say that clothes open all doors.
Certainly, it hinges on what you dress, wear, and the image you want to portrait. Nevertheless, do not forget that clothes can help you on your life way.
