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Reasons for Riots In this Essay we want to talk about Riots , Do you had experienced any riots? First of all i recall many riots in my country , One of them was about team's fan , I remember after the football match accomplish between two popular teams in Tehran , People whoever been an advocated both of team's players came to the streets and for a long time arguing about their teams , People whose not satisfied about the match results , Start to take idiocy the place which is general and depends on all the people and built for people's welfare .Then after a few time with the police's Intervention, This violence finished..... Some of our Iranians councilor start research about this abnormal events and after this riots governor's minster in sports made a committee to consider all the reason and take evidence to find a solution about abnormally in society. After a long time reveal that the causes of teenagers have no entertainment in their neighborhood and no chance to discharge their energy , React an abnormal behavior . At least their found a solution to handle this issue without hitting any one . The governor decided to built a lot of gym and promenade to involve the teenager and by this way can decrease the parents concern and controls the idiot event.

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Reasons for Riots

In this essay I want to talk about riots. Have you  experienced any riots?
I remember many riots in my country; one of them involved football fans. I remember once after a football match between two popular teams in Tehran, supporters of both team came onto the streets and argued about their teams for a long time. People who were not satisfied with the result of the match started to do stupid things in public places. Then after a short time, and with police intervention, this violence finished.....
Some Iranian councilors started researching these abnormal events and after these riots, the minister for sports formed a committee to consider all the reasons and collect evidence to find a solution about abnormalities in society. After a long time, it was revealed that because teenagers have no entertainment in their neighborhood and no opportunity to burn off their energy, they react with abnormal behavior. At least they found a solution to tackle this issue without hitting anyone! The government decided to build a lot of gyms and promenades for teenagers and in this way it can decrease parents' concerns and control idiotic events.

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