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My best friend I'm a university student,my university is far away from my home.It takes 20 hours to go back home by train,but i can take a flight home,only lasts 2 hours.I miss my home very much.Nevertheless, I 'm so luchy ,because my best friend regard me as relative.I feel that I am at home when I stay with her. Her name is Candy.Just like her name,she is so sweet.Today,when I woke up in the morning,she had cooked eggs to me.I was so surprise.I like going shopping with her,the reason why is she has pretty good taste,and after it,we have delicious food.The other day,It was my birthday,She made a book to me.In this book,She posted my photos on every page,and wrote down the stories what happend to us, we visted to each other's home,we went out for celebrated mid-autumn festival,we did homework together and so on.It remind me that the good time we had spent together. Maybe we will separate from each other after gratudate,but our friendship is forever,I want to say thank you to my best friend.And now I have a problem,what should I do for Candy on her birthday?Do you have any good ideas? 我是一个大学生,我的大学里我家很远,坐火车回家要花20个小时,但是我可以做飞机回家,只要两小时。我很想念我家,然而,我很幸运,以为我的好朋友把我当亲人看待,我感觉当我和她在一起的时候我像是在家里一样。 她的名字叫Candy,正如她的名字一样,她是如此的贴心.今天早上我醒来,她已经做好了鸡蛋给我,我很惊讶。我喜欢和她一起去买东西,因为她的眼光很好,之后,我们一起去吃美味的食物。前几天,是我的生日,她做了一本书给我,在这本书里,她把我的照片贴在了每一页上,还写下了我们之间发生的事情,我们拜访各自的家,我们一起庆祝中秋节,我们一起做作业等等,这让我回想起我们在一起的美好时光。 也许我们在毕业以后会分开,可是我的友谊是天长地久的。我想对我的好朋友说谢谢。现在我有个问题,在她生日的时候我应该为她做点什么呢?你们有什么好的建议吗? Here is the picture of the book.
24 nov. 2012 04:45
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My best friend

I'm a university student. My university is far away from my home. It takes twenty hours to go back home by train but I can take a flight home which only lasts two hours. I miss my home very much. Nevertheless, I'm so lucky because my best friend regards me as relative. I feel that I like I am at home when I'm stay with her.


Her name is Candy. Just like her name, she is so sweet. Today, when I woke up in the morning, she had cooked some eggs to for me. I was so surprised. I like going shopping with her. The reason why is that she has pretty good taste. and After that it, we have had delicious food. The other day It was my birthday a few days ago. She made a book tofor me. In this book, she posted stuck a photo of me photos on every page and wrote down the stories that about us that related to the photos what happend to us e.g visiting each other's homes, we went going out for to celebrate the mid-autumn festival, doing homework together and so on. It reminded me of that the good time we had spent together.


Maybe we will separate from each other after we graduate gratudate, but our friendship is will last forever. I want to say thank you to my best friend.And Now I have a problem. What should I do for Candy on her birthday? Do you have any good ideas?

我是一个大学生,我的大学里我家很远,坐火车回家要花20个小时,但是我可以做飞机回家,只要两小时。我很想念我家,然而,我很幸运,以为我的好朋友把我当亲人看待,我感觉当我和她在一起的时候我像是在家里一样。
她的名字叫Candy,正如她的名字一样,她是如此的贴心.今天早上我醒来,她已经做好了鸡蛋给我,我很惊讶。我喜欢和她一起去买东西,因为她的眼光很好,之后,我们一起去吃美味的食物。前几天,是我的生日,她做了一本书给我,在这本书里,她把我的照片贴在了每一页上,还写下了我们之间发生的事情,我们拜访各自的家,我们一起庆祝中秋节,我们一起做作业等等,这让我回想起我们在一起的美好时光。
也许我们在毕业以后会分开,可是我的友谊是天长地久的。我想对我的好朋友说谢谢。现在我有个问题,在她生日的时候我应该为她做点什么呢?你们有什么好的建议吗?


Here is the a picture of the book.

24 novembre 2012
真的是很不错的朋友,你也很幸运,关于送礼物,这个你就多花花心思吧,祝你成功
24 novembre 2012
you are too lucky to have a friend like her.you spent many days with her so you may know her well.guess what she like most give her that as her bday present.or a book like what she did for you bday
24 novembre 2012

My best friend

I'm a University student,my university is far away from my home.It takes 20 hours to go back home by train,but i can take a flight instead,only takes 2 hours.I miss my home very much.Nevertheless, I 'm so lucky ,that my best friend regard me as a  relative.I feel being  at home when I stay with her.
Her name is Candy.,she is so sweet Just like her name.Today,when I woke up in the morning,she had cooked eggs for me.I was so surprised.I like to go shopping with her,the reason  is she has a pretty good taste at shopping,and after that ,we will  have delicious food.The other day,It was my birthday,She presented a book to me.In that book,She  had posted my photos on every page,and wrote down the stories that  happend between  us, We visted  each other's home,we went out for celebrating mid-autumn festival,we did homework together and so on.It reminds  me those  the good days we had spent together. 

Maybe we will separate  after gratudatation ,but our friendship will be there forever,I want to say thank you to my best friend.And now I have a problem,what should I do for Candy on her birthday?Do you have any good idea?

我是一个大学生,我的大学里我家很远,坐火车回家要花20个小时,但是我可以做飞机回家,只要两小时。我很想念我家,然而,我很幸运,以为我的好朋友把我当亲人看待,我感觉当我和她在一起的时候我像是在家里一样。
她的名字叫Candy,正如她的名字一样,她是如此的贴心.今天早上我醒来,她已经做好了鸡蛋给我,我很惊讶。我喜欢和她一起去买东西,因为她的眼光很好,之后,我们一起去吃美味的食物。前几天,是我的生日,她做了一本书给我,在这本书里,她把我的照片贴在了每一页上,还写下了我们之间发生的事情,我们拜访各自的家,我们一起庆祝中秋节,我们一起做作业等等,这让我回想起我们在一起的美好时光。
也许我们在毕业以后会分开,可是我的友谊是天长地久的。我想对我的好朋友说谢谢。现在我有个问题,在她生日的时候我应该为她做点什么呢?你们有什么好的建议吗?
Here is the picture of the book.

24 novembre 2012
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